Weekly Journal
By:
Luky
Class:……………
Subject:
Writing II
English
Education Study Program
Sarjanawiyata
Tamansiswa University
2014
Weekly
Journal
ü Weekly
journal writing is a process through which students put more emphasis on
continual efforts to express their thoughts verbally.
ü The
basic principle behind the ongoing demand of journal writing, for a certainty,
is dual linkage.
ü First,
students want to increase their writing competence that covers the capability
to write, benefit from knowledgeable guidance about the writing project’s topic
to the extent that a further attempt to practice is necessary.
ü Second,
journal writing has a real and positive
contribution in developing students’
potentials and intellectual skills,
power of reflection and imagination.
Reflections
The reflections are written by
the students based on the following prompts:
ü
the
effects of writing weekly journals in developing their writing skills,
ü
their
reactions towards lecturer’s editing (feedback) and peer review (if any) in
facilitating the development of their writing skills,
ü
the
challenges they encounter in using weekly journals as a platform in expressing
their ideas verbally, and
ü
these
reflections served as a basis in ascertaining students’ perceptions on the
impacts of weekly journals in developing their writing skills.
Original Version
Weekly Journal
Week : ONE
Day/date : January 31, 2014
Name : Diana Pangestika
St Number : 2013 017 033
Descriptive
Text
VIOLENCE
ON TV
Violence
in (on) TV, (contrary to peaceful life), to contrast to life peaceful is for all (age-neutral). Children, teenagers,
adolescents, adults, and old people (are) tend to
inadvertently susceptible to its grave effects. To
(Exposed) violence is (geared to creating an embryo of reprisal, aggressive
behaviors), like
creating punishments, aggressivity, (staggering) riots and
other (recurrent) repeat crime. For (one)
thing, violence is a destroyer of physical and mental of human and how it amply
affects juvenile crime and the increasing rate of teenage delinquency. Violence
is an indication of underprivilege, fall back in the capacity to use good (decent)
language. TV programs are related to (the clothing of) life, and no program
should (go naked into) cause chaos in the
world. So (Thus,) the current increase
violence in conflict areas and battlefield in the movie, or the news is very dramatic (echo
the story of dramatic scenes).
Reflection
ü
This
weekly journal helps me to write well.
ü
The
feedbacks from my lecturer are important to improve my writing skills.
ü
I
recognize the mistakes I have made and I should be careful when writing the
next weekly journal.
Revised Version
Weekly Journal
Week : ONE
Day/date : January 31, 2014
Name : Diana Pangestika
St Number : 2013 017 033
Descriptive
Text
VIOLENCE
ON TV
Violence
on TV, contrary to peaceful life, is age-neutral. Children, teenagers,
adolescents, adults, and old people are inadvertently susceptible to its grave
effects. Exposed violence is geared to creating an embryo of reprisal,
aggressive behaviors, staggering riots and other recurrent crime. For one
thing, violence is a destroyer of physical and mental well-being particularly
how it amply affects juvenile crime and the increasing rate of teenage
delinquency. Violence is an indication of underprivilege, fall back in the
capacity to use decent language. TV programs are the clothing of life, and no
program should go naked into the world. Thus, the current excavated violence in
conflict areas and battlefield in either the movie, or the news echo the story
of dramatic scenes.
Reflection
ü
This
weekly journal helps me to write well.
ü
The
feedbacks from my lecturer are important to improve my writing skills.
ü
I
recognize the mistakes I have made and I should be careful when writing the
next weekly journal.
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